Some of My Artwork

[BrokenYetPretty]

The first two are the most recent. The last one I drew when I was 17 and I had a bit of problem with drawing hands then.

[sataned]

pretty good i guess.. not really though.. you should learn some basic skills first if you really want to draw, find some tutorials... GOODJOB!! ;D

[BrokenYetPretty]

pretty good i guess.. not really though.. you should learn some basic skills first if you really want to draw, find some tutorials... GOODJOB!! ;D

and you should learn basic critique skills before you comment. I'll just get rid of this thread. I should have never posted this anyway.

Thanks for making someone feel bad. -_-

[Jose]

and you should learn basic critique skills before you comment. I'll just get rid of this thread. I should have never posted this anyway.

Thanks for making someone feel bad. -_-

Okay for one thing you can't delete the thread chances are the mods prob won't do it either o_O; also you should let someone discourage you from posting, it's your art, if you like you should show it off, you worked hard (assuming here)

I will give you a topical reply now O_o

Okay the 1st picture:
hm, cleaning up around the eye(s) a bit and darken the outline. For the BG either go with darker or lighter shading that in the image itself not the same kind O_o.

2nd Picture:
I like it, but it's rather boring, at something to it, maybe color o_O or a background, a tree, idk just something

3rd picture:
Sorry to say but I don't like this one, looks like she's blushing o_O and I think that you drew too many stars. Make her hair look smoother or softer if you can that would make it much better


Overall good start keep posting regardless what some people may say ;D

[BrokenYetPretty]

Whoops. I got hacked again.
The second reply was not me. It's been happening on another site too. Sorry about that >.<

[sataned]

and you should learn basic critique skills before you comment. I'll just get rid of this thread. I should have never posted this anyway.

Thanks for making someone feel bad. -_-

wow ok.. i was just being real with you, giving you some constructive criticism, it would seriously help your art if you learned some of the basics, if you took it the wrong way... then so be it, but if you want me to be totally unrealistic and lie to you then here it goes:
HEY THOSE ARE THE BEST DRAWINGS IVE EVER SEEN YOUR PRO!

[rikumi]

Whoops. I got hacked again.
The second reply was not me. It's been happening on another site too. Sorry about that >.<

Perhaps you should edit it...? O_O
About your drawings....honestly I don't like them. I somehow agree with sataned. You should work on the basic proportioning ...In the 3rd picture I could not make a conclusion on the hands...If it's the girl's left hand the thumb should be on the other side ....it look just like the right hand. The face doesn't look bad, but try doing proportion circles before you draw out your characters. You should work on things like shading and lining too.

P.S. Sry if I'm too mean >w<" Gomenasai...(I'm not usually like this O_O)