Oposites of the world

[Raineyu-san]

The darkness from the moonlight
The shine from the sun
A broken heart was caused tonight
A love has just begun
Stars glittering in the black sky
Clouds floating threw
She’s crying, just waiting to die
He smiles as long as he knew
The moon is covered by the clouds
The sun is gone, hiding its rays
She screams in pain very loud
He’s ready to play another game
The darkness from the moonlight
The shine from the sun
A broken heart was caused tonight
A love has just begun.




I wrote this while feeling a lil blue :c I posted it on DA so i thought i'd post it here.Hope you like it...?

[seraphic_demon]

[QUOTE]

Clouds floating threw

did you mean "through"? or were the stars glittering in the dark sky thrown by floating clouds?

anyway, the poem's good, got confused but good nonetheless,

[Raineyu-san]

Oops, Sorry for the Typo ^^;;;
thanks~