Translators seem to have gotten the lyrics to "inner Universe" wrong

[Tachikoma1000]

CORRECTED VERSION BELOW!!!

Song: Inner Universe
Anime Show:Ghost in the Shell: Stand Alone Complex
Original posting:

http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/gho...eruniverse.htm

THE LYRICS TO THIS SONG ARE IN RUSSIAN, ENGLISH, LATIN, and JAPANESE

Album / Collection: Stand Alone Complex
Description: Opening Song
Lyrics: Origa/Shanti Snyder
Music: Yoko Kanno
Vocals: Origa
Treble: Benedict Delmaestro (The London Oratory School Schola)

CORRECTED VERSION!!! (Russian pronounciation, followed by english translation)

Angely i demony kruzhili nado mnoj
Angels and demons circle above my head

Rassekali ternii i mlechnye puti
cleaving through thorns and Milky Ways

Ne znaet schast'ya tol'ko tot,
Kto ego zova ponyat' ne smog...
He who does not percieve his calling, does not know true happiness...

CHORUS (in green): (sung twice quickly) {

Naladubuites'! ---(Japanese phrase)
Watch in awe!
Naladubuites'!
Watch in awe!

Aeria Gloris! ---(Latin phrase)
Heavenly glory!
Aeria Gloris!
Heavenly glory!
}
(english)
I am Calling Calling out!
Spirits, I am calling!!!

S Taboj ostat'sya dol'she...
To be with you longer...

Calling Calling, in the depths of longing!

S Taboj ostat'sya dol'she...
To be with you longer!

CHORUS (see above)

Stand alone... Where was life when it had a meaning...
Stand alone... Nothing's real anymore and...

...Beskonechnyj beg...
...Endless running...

Poka zhiva ya mogu starat'sya na letu ne upast',
While I am alive, I can try not to fall while flying,

Ne razuchit'sya mechtat'...lyubit'...
nor to forget how to dream...to love...

...Beskonechnyj beg...
...Endless running...

(english)
Calling Calling out! For The Place of Knowing!
There's more that what can be linked!
Calling Calling, Never will I look away!
From what life has left for me.
Yearning Yearning, for what's left of loving!

S Taboj ostat'sya dol'she...
To be with you longer...
Calling Calling, in the depths of longing!
S Taboj ostat'sya dol'she...
To be with you longer!

CHORUS (see above)...

[Tachikoma1000]

OOps! I forgot to post the link to the original lyrics
http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/gho...eruniverse.htm

[AzureDark]

Can you post your full translit and translation here? If it's alright with you.

[Tachikoma1000]

It has been done!!!
The full song!

to listen to it, follow the URL posted here:
http://gh.ffshrine.org/song/1898/20
and click "Save content as..."

[AzureDark]

Done to what you posted, tell me if there's anything else to fix?