Let Go

[Ire_Hikari]

its pretty short but i hope you like it... ^^v

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why are my feelings always snubbed by you
i know you dont feel the same way
but at least you could tell that to me
straight to my face

i will always be a friend to you
ive known that from the start
but deep down inside,
youve always been in my heart

yet i have to move on
there's still more of this world i want to see
i will find love, i will feel pain

so my friend i ask of you
just cheer on for me... :')

[aka-ba-ra-hana-wabi-ra]

*burrr* I had chills from the poem. (but in a good way) it just shows that the poem holds feelings. I LOVE SAD/LOVI DOVI OPEMS <3

[Capernicus]

It doesn't....really sound like a poem to be honest. I don't think it counts as one, does it? I admit I know squat about what makes poetry what it is but...am I the only one thinking this? o_O;;;

[Fabala]

Elaborate, please. What doesn't sound like a poem about it? Realistically, there are numerous acceptable poem styles, one of which does include sentences continuing from line to line (was that the issue?).

[Capernicus]

Well if it is a poem then it is a bit pointless, it just seems to run around in circles and no go anywhere. First the narrator complains about how someone is snubbing her on, then she says she's gonna move on, but then she still gives a damn about the person. I also think it is mistitled, she never really lets go, does she? Just my opinion though...

[Yami Chishio]

what's wrong with it? i kinda like it...its as if she's confused...she loves the person but is still thinking if she'd really let go...at least thats what i think... ^^"