Wild and Tame

[Mighty Dragon]

She loves to wear black for her name is Yin
She loves to wear white for her name is Yang
They are twin sisters that look the same
But one it wild and one is tame
One loves kittens and hates mud
The other hates flowers and loves blood
They are the same but not the same
For one is wild
The other is tame

[Mega Man Zero]

At first i thought, you were talking about one person, but when i kept on reading, i thought it was pretty interesting. I like it, I see you are a beginner. Keep up the good work.

[Kamara Sagara]

She loves to wear black for her name is Yin
She loves to wear white for her name is Yang
They are twin sisters that look the same
But one it wild and one is tame
One loves kittens and hates mud
The other hates flowers and loves blood
They are the same but not the same
For one is wild
The other is tame

This is a nice poem. It was a pleasant read. However, I would suggest adding some more contrasts between the two people because that was an interesting aspect of this poem. Also, while I believe you shouldn't change it much, but you should add an alternate line before the first, a hook to grab the reader. You just plunge into the poem, which doesn't hinder you too much, but it would help to have more of a "catalyst". Very good work though. I look forward to reading more.

Kamara Sagara

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