My Sketch

**death-angel** · 12-21-2007 08:48 AM

I used to have a thread like this but I stopped since the pictures were blurry but now I starting again...and well I hope you like it.

Feel free to comment. It'll be much appreciated.

**kiagoth** · 12-21-2007 02:36 PM

yea i like them really ^^

**Nano** · 12-21-2007 03:10 PM

That's soooooooo nice I swear....I love it ^o^

**Raksha Keller** · 12-21-2007 03:57 PM

the second one is freakin' awesome, btw

**BuLmA** · 12-22-2007 09:30 AM

O.k! Nice work Denise!^^ Hmmm...the first pic...this "Fallen" I notice her (The Lady) arm and hand right away! why? because it's great! when I draw hands....damn! I mess up my drawings then you know! I'm not good in hands!!T_T their hairs are stunning!^^ and I love the dress!
the next drawing.... Wee! death angel eh? the girl is prettier than the first one! Keep it up mah friend!! nice work!^^

**death-angel** · 12-22-2007 08:20 PM

Lol thanks everybody!

Here's another one..this one was done in pen. ^^

Its kinda old though...

**Saracin** · 12-28-2007 02:50 AM

Very nice Death-Angel. You're very good and your attention to detail is wonderful. Keep up the good work

**TheCruelDolly** · 12-28-2007 07:47 AM

yey! very good job n.n

The first one pic - i like it ^^ just more work with fingers and it would be really awesome
Second one pic - Omg ! so many details , really really good job ( i''ll be to lazy to draw so many details XD)...
The last one - Kawaii n.n i love the dress.

keep going ^^

**MissChelly** · 12-29-2007 12:04 AM

I agree with BuLmA, those hands are awesome- and, well, I too suck at hands so I definitely bow to anyone who can do them! haha
Also- I truly like your shading skill, it really adds that extra something to the art-especially the first picture, the dress just seems to pop out because of how well the shading is. Great work!

**death-angel** · 01-02-2008 12:11 AM

Thanks again..to tell you the truth Im still having trouble with the hands

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Here's some more..

**BuLmA** · 01-03-2008 01:12 AM

This third drawing that you made is my favorite!very nice one....no! great one!LOL the girl is cute plus her attire is fantastic!..well my suggestion Denise is that maybe next time you'll use a a sign pen so that your drawings would be clear^^

**Sanosuke23** · 01-03-2008 04:22 AM

Your fingers are okay overall, but practice some more and they'll be really good in no time.

1st: her left forearm(our right) is too long compared to the hand and upper arm, and her eyes are waaaaaaaaay off the mark. In fact, they're pointing in two different directions, neither of which is "forward." Otherwise it's alright.

2nd: Eyes are better, eyebrows aren't level though. I can't quite tell what exactly is going on in the background, maybe next time use harder strokes for the details you want to stand out?

3rd: I'll confess, I have no idea what is going on in this picture at all.

4th: the hand coming from the bottom of the picture has a disproportionate and misangled thumb. Unless the hand is broken, I dunno. I think that's blood...

5th: You need to work on fists, but it's alright overall. Next time try adding some simple folds, particularly near the cuffs on the sleeves. I also don't know if she's supposed to be sitting on something, but if not and that's supposed to be the back of her jacket/skirt thing, it shouldn't connect where you have it connecting.

Keep working at it, you're alright. Try thinking more in terms of three dimensions, though. Just because it's on a flat paper doesn't mean you can't give it depth!

**Altair Son of None** · 01-03-2008 06:18 AM

Amazing sketches, I like them all. Amazing how much creations can be completed with just one mind.

**omniking3** · 01-03-2008 10:24 AM

Was that an insult Altair? be kind, she did a wonderful job. Personally, I can get the geometric ratios of the curves of the body correct, but I can't draw faces or hands for the life of me. It helps me to take a picture of my hand holding something though.