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Misato C.G
8-08-09
Hitomi C.G
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Yuzuki C.G
8-01-09
C.G Kaisuke update
How is this art style this is just the front view crit. it down below.
1.Can this work in a action manga
2. is this very similar to other styles?
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This is great keep it up love to see more
Man...get this trash out of my face right now.
hm, different...keep working on it.
WTF is this looks the same as all the other manga.
8-09-09
Misato C.G
8-08-09
Hitomi C.G
8-04-09
Yuzuki C.G
8-01-09
C.G Kaisuke update
How is this art style this is just the front view crit. it down below.
1.Can this work in a action manga
2. is this very similar to other styles?
Last edited by Kaisuke7; 08-09-2009 at 03:47 AM.
I like your art style. and I think it can work in a action manga.
Yes it can work with action manga, and hmm .. well, not exactly. It's quite unique ^^
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well . . . it's okay, but not the kind that I would like.
I think if it was cleaned up a bit, and drawn a bit different, I'd like it, but I'm not really one for judging art. I draw, but my heart stays in the writing.
It kinda depends on the story, I guess. . .
Anyways . . .
1. I don't really know. Since the other two say so, you should listen to them, I suppose. But I think it should be a little different . . .
2. It kinda reminds me of this one manga I read called Re:Play. By Christy Lijewski. Yea, it's and English one.
Last edited by *Tsuki*; 06-02-2009 at 08:38 PM.
I like it. Specially his clothes.
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Thanks for the detail comment iv'e made a few changes for the guys but the girl are a different story. im working it
Last edited by Kaisuke7; 07-08-2009 at 10:01 PM.
here is a few of my chara's
what do u think?
any suggestions?Tips
*loads really slowly*
well, from what I can see, in the small pics . . .
you seem to be getting really good. ^.^
Let's see . . .
I like the girl on the right, in the third one best.
Is the guy in the last one missing an arm?
Lol, cool. =)
Umm . . . oh, I also like the girl on the left in the fourth one.
*still waiting for it to load*
*thinks* well, perhaps I'm wrong, I can't really tell, but what you should work on most, is the hair for the girls and the hands for the guys?
Lol, sorry if I'm not much help.
But you're getting really good. ^.^
I love your character designs.. I only have one suggention, you should fix the anatomy.. Hehe~ about the character it self, I have nothing to say.. They're all already very cool!
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the first one, the one you colored. havent scene that one =/ but i like it of course, but if you want suggestions then id have to agree that cleaning it up a bit would make it tons better, like spend more time in PS. and whoa! i havent scene the new kanichi either, its way cooler than it was before! excellent. so overall, if it was a bit less sketched out and had crisper lines,(or maybe ink them, and btw, i just got a Sakura Pigma Micron inking pen, sizes .2mm and .5mm, you should get).
thanks all for the commentary, I well keep at it.
whoa nice i need to get me some
Last edited by Kaisuke7; 07-08-2009 at 10:00 PM.
First off, you know how to draw, your images look good. Your poses aren't ridgid for the most part and I like the concepts you're going for...
Now for some criticism:
The pose of the girl to the left of the girl with glasses looks great for the top half but from the middle down she looks stiff and somewhat unnatural for the pose that she has for the middle up. I think if you set her left leg out further and really accentuated her hips out to the right (exagerate the pose further) then it would look great.
There are also a few issues with proportion that I see.
For your first image (at the top) the guy's head looks too big for the body.
Down to the topless guy with dreadlocks, his arms look like sticks compared to his ripped body.
The girl that looks like she has her back up against the wall, if you brought the silhouette of her cheek in just a little bit to make her face thinner it would make her face look better.
The guy that's sitting cross legged, bring his right foot up over his left bottom leg (I think it would look better, not sure), the way it is right now his legs look kinda odd.
Nitty gritty stuff but that's the kind of stuff we all struggle with. The rest of it is great.
BTW as far as Densuke's comment goes about your drawings looking sketched, consider starting your drawings with a very hard pencil, like a 6H or something and then after you get the pose and sketchy details done use a softer darker pencil like a 4-6B to lay down your more concrete lines.
If you want to ink it then the sakura microns are fantastic. Get a couple of different pen widths or my fave their brush pen which is harder to use but yields much more organic lines. If you're not confident enough to color or ink your original drawing then do it on tracing paper.
Good luck and keep it up.
Wow now that's some good feed back hey thanks=] im quickly starting to notice the little things to. So yah love the feed back all specialy when there detailed.
Last edited by Kaisuke7; 07-08-2009 at 10:00 PM.
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nice pose, and good details, specially on the studs. as for the best looking colour. i like the brown that you have always had o.0...always fun to play around though haha
Good, but all the characters have simmilar features. Long faces, small chins and noses, and short lip-to-nose area. I get in ruts with facial features too. Just try and make faces more distinct.
You also look like you're expiramenting (SP?) with posing bodies and putting perspective on faces. That's really hard to do. And I really can't offer much help, just try and look at photos of people doing things to improve on that part of your drawings.
a more detail pic of Kai
cool new picture of kino there, but his face isnt the same as the previous one you posted, here i think it looks alil more realistic, but just pointing it out to you.
see here
thanks this was the practice one before i did the one up top so it's a little funky
Last edited by Kaisuke7; 07-08-2009 at 09:59 PM.
i thought so cuz i like the one at the top more
p.s. tell me wut u think about my post with the armor cuz i enlarged it
here is shuke face iv'e been play'n around with
Last edited by Kaisuke7; 07-08-2009 at 10:03 PM.
haha dang man, ur super milking this post, posting one thing per day. hm the facial expressions of shuke are good, the structure is really starting to get consistent. and plys its not too sketchy so thats a plus aswell. and shuke with the head down pose above looks good, but the legs are a bit rushged i think, his shin bone is too curved, keep em coming though
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