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    Default The Time Machine

    This is about how even if you could prevent someone from leaving, maybe you shouldn't.

    The Time Machine

    Tell me the time
    The time of day
    I only pray to get away.
    Too much to pay, the memories say,
    And there's no way for me to stay.

    Tell me the time
    The time and date
    It's never too late to set things straight.
    And though I hate this new debate,
    I choose to wait and change my fate.

    Tell me the time
    And please don't lie
    I've seen the sky so let me fly.
    Promise you'll try to keep your eyes dry,
    And don't deny my time to die.
    Ish hogtied, mostly, on a grill, oh, baby, covered in chocolate, mostly,
    with a banana in his mouth. Oh, oh, baby, if only Ai were that chick....

    ~AnimeGlobe, Old Skool - Society for the Creative Eating of the Ish~


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    Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Which line are you referring to?
    Ish hogtied, mostly, on a grill, oh, baby, covered in chocolate, mostly,
    with a banana in his mouth. Oh, oh, baby, if only Ai were that chick....

    ~AnimeGlobe, Old Skool - Society for the Creative Eating of the Ish~


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    I love it! Very well put together. I really like the ending too about keeping your eyes dry.. Very touching. Hehe. Make mooorreee! ^_^

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    Default Hey

    I really really really like your poem! I write poetry too mine isn't that good though and it is depressing and the ones I actually show to people they always say that it is very deep but what ever this your poem not mine. I hope you write more

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    Wow I really love this poem!^^ I can't believe I've only read it now, after two years of it being posted here hehe. I love your choice of words and how each line rhymed together, it made one whole great package! It was also very moving... especially since the topic is about life and death... great job Sonata! ^_^

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    I am really amazed somehow. Actually the poem was short but it was so powerful in each of its lines.
    I think its a great poem , very thoughtful and nicely put into words.

    I really wanna read more of your work Sonata.
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    wish me luck for furture guys!!!!
    Thanks for everything!!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Bane Hallow View Post
    I am really amazed somehow. Actually the poem was short but it was so powerful in each of its lines.
    I think its a great poem , very thoughtful and nicely put into words.

    I really wanna read more of your work Sonata.
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    Yeah I agree with you Bane Hollow!!!

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    I love your poem!!! ^_^ It really makes me feel like I'm the one who's saying it. Also, it's really well put.
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    Hah well thanks. ^_^; It's been a long time since I posted any poetry. I felt bad since it was all old stuff and nothing new. Maybe I'll try a few more in the future.
    Ish hogtied, mostly, on a grill, oh, baby, covered in chocolate, mostly,
    with a banana in his mouth. Oh, oh, baby, if only Ai were that chick....

    ~AnimeGlobe, Old Skool - Society for the Creative Eating of the Ish~


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    yeah never stop writing! We support you!^^

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