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[Dementia7]

Rukia

torapu the eyes look like that because it is a side view
another drawing

[Zantetsuken]

Yay! Crayons!

[sa5m]

Nice, post more! =)

[torapu]

I don't wanna sound rude. This isn't REALLY bad. A couple tips, though.....

The eyes - A bit uneven, and they don't match to well.
Hair - Kinda pointy. ^^; Maybe you should try rounding the edges...?

Everything else isn't that bad.

Again, these comments aren't supposed to be negative.

[LiLi.]

Ummmm...i cant say i like it. Rukias skin color is too dark, face is abit too skinny and her hair is too long. personally i kinda like the 2nd one, i like her emoticon. Work hard haiiii?

[torapu]

torapu the eyes look like that because it is a side view
another drawing

It wouldn't matter, either way.

The shape of eyes doesn't change, even on a profile view. ^^;
And the eye color doesn't match...

Again, not tryin to be mean!

Ummmm...i cant say i like it. Rukias skin color is too dark, face is abit too skinny and her hair is too long.

I agree, Sasuke-Clan. Rukia's hair is shoulder-length, and she's very pale. The face is skinny, but not too bad.

Edit - Just thought of something....

If you wanna fix up the eyes (you don't have to) try going with the shape of the left one, it looks better. At a cocked angle, eyes can be hard to draw, so you pulled it off fairly.


Hope you take everyone's advice as a good tip, not something negative. Have fun drawing!

[ArucardPL]

Sorry for saying that, but the Rukia you drew doesn't remind me the Rukia from Bleach manga/anime. You should practice your drawing maybe by redrawing other pictures. Especially her face looks not good =/
Um... maybe this will help:
http://search.deviantart.com/searchc...orial&offset=0