Love

[Kalt96]

Why did you left me
alone, standing in the rain?
Without you all I can feel
is how solitude causes my pain.

Tell me, what have I done
Why are you no longer in my heart?
Now everything but agony is gone
and all these feeling I don't want.

I must have you back in my life.
I'll look for you in every single person,
until my eyes lose all of their sight,
until I see how death at me beckons.

[-Blackfire-]

Good poem. It feels like it's unfinished though, like there's something missing. It seems like you meant every single word in this poem.. like it just came out of your heart... Oh, did i mention i like it?

[Ari_86]

i like it alot it made me think of somone that i love..... >.> ugh...but i really like the poem and i agree it sounds like you ment every single word and it came from the heart. Good work, hope to see many more of your poems.

[Shia_san]

i like reading the poetry posted on here.