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    Wink [untitled]

    Im in love with someone new! I
    cant believe it but its true!
    Hes the perfect man in every
    way. He brought sun shine to
    my darkened day.


    Hes the one Ive been serching
    for. Hes come and helped me pick
    my shattered heart off the floor.
    Hes been the first to kiss away my
    tears. Hes the one I want to be with
    for the rest of the years.

    He did the unthinkable, he made me
    believe. Hes my knight in shining
    armore, I no longer have to greave.
    I do not have to worry about him
    breaking my heart. I can see it in
    his eyes that we will never part.

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    Too serene. Too happy. This will make it more realistic. The girl finds the guy who restores the broken peices of her heart, her "knight in shining armor" only to find that this guy takes the restored and not only breaks it into peices two times smaller, he also incinerates it in burning flames.

    Okay..I have issues.
    Last edited by Azel; 07-21-2007 at 02:52 AM. Reason: I'm a guy! I believe in romance! I'm not too cynical, too pesimistic..am I?

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    I wouldn't say "too" happy, but it really is sweet and extremely joyous. It sounds like a poem that'd come from someone who fell in love because of "love at first sight"-- so intensely. Like... infatuation!

    I do like it though. I think it's cute. =] A few grammatical errors here and there, but it's not bad. Not in my opinion at least.


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