Wisfull like the Wind

[|Ai|]

The horizon in the distance,
The waves are breaking tall.

One ship against the elements,
Striving to reach it's destination.
All alone in the ocean,
One speck of sand on a beach.

The Wind fills the sails,
Dancing back and forth in the breeze.
The Ship surges forward,
The horizon looms ahead.

The home port bekons,
Like a bed after a long night out.

Exhausted the sailor falls into a sleep,
A sleep that carries him off on another voyage,
A voyage not of the sea.

Thoughts, anything I can improve on?

[suky]

You know I'm kinda glad that I see a poem around here that isn't about death or love or something esle. I congrats you on extending your ideas. Ok, to be truthfull, I didn't get it very well, either you're poem needed something or I'm just too dumb to get it. lol

[|Ai|]

I'll take option two over option one any day....

Thanks for your remark and the rep...Glad to have known someone read it.