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    Wow...it's been close to half a year since I last posted something...maybe longer. I'll throw on a pretty recent poem, probably no more than 2 months old. Enjoy, everyone.


    Surrealism and Construction Paper
    Blue skies are covered with the texture of a used Band-Aid.
    Sidewalks arenít places for a nothing kind of afternoon.
    Summer.
    Another one of those things that makes you want to live.
    Can I relate this woman to this season?
    Looks like it.
    I imagined, a minute ago, her face, and my face
    Together.
    Connected at the lips.
    I think the sun knows what itís talking about when it hits her in the face.
    Shining properly, doing what it was made to do.
    Throw me into the air and I feel like Iím dreaming.
    Like that feeling you get when you jump really high
    And you donít seem to land.
    Itís not a bad thing.
    Timeless reality going nowhere because I make it stay still for a few more minutes.
    Tree-lines.
    Garden imagery.
    A simple thought of a stroller and the two of us
    Makes my world go Ďround.
    Compact disk or hard-driven emotion.
    Get off the computer dumbass, come and check out what Iíve got here.
    I think Iím making
    Art.
    I think weíre feeling
    Each other.
    As confusing as everything seems (or at least how I make it seem),
    It all makes perfect sense.
    Parallel to my pregnant thoughts
    And my rubber ball vocabulary.
    Here comes another sunny afternoon.
    How is it that youíve made me such a man?
    I never knew what to say.
    But now every word just kind ofÖ
    JustÖ
    Kind ofÖ
    Spills out like a fountain and I canít seem to control it when I think so much and youíre on top of the world in my headÖyouÖmake it all worth living for. You give me the most Iíve ever had; could ever have dreamed of.
    Tactical performance might I add.
    You seem to play it smart from every angle.
    Smarty-pants in a good way,
    Sheís nothing short of perfect.


    So fill me up to the brim...

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    i like you poem, it's good

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    why not you make a story but no a poem hah?
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    Thanks for the compliments. It's about the woman of my life, if nobody noticed lol. Well, that mixed with lines from a song I made up in a dream. The first two lines of this poem came from a song that I heard while walking down the sidewalk in my dream like a year ago and I always found it would go great in a poem...so I decided to start it off here...it worked nicely with the concept I think.


    So fill me up to the brim...

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