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    Hello everyone..i'm new here...and i want to see everyone's opinion about THIS stupid drawing...its dirty, the scanner's useless, and the ink used is ballpoint pen. Toning is made from Adobe Photoshop 7.0 (too outdated, right?) and the clouds doesn't even show up behind the weaves...please offer your opinion and CRITICIZE me...even if it hurts (ouch..!), hehehehehehehe! Please...I'm not looking for attention, it just seems that my art is way too lame...please, criticize as much as you want...

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    wow..!! its beautiful its not lame.. i think its great..!!
    no need to say such negative things.. its great, i tell you..!!
    keep it up..
    it would be better if you post more.. n_n

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    wow!! its really awesome...but you need to work on your coloring a little...but other than that i think its really great..keep practicing...and also keep up the good job.^_^
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    i think is more more more ok than my drawing.mine was the worst in the world.
    anyway..ganbatte!!!







    may LEGEND S R.I.P..such great buddy..
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    i decide use my oldsig>.>

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    yep...sorry...>_<
    i just think its too dirty...
    maybe i just need to get a hold of myself!
    thanks

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    Its actually very pretty for a 'dirty drawing' and the ink turns out awfully solid.

    I really like it. Good work.

    EDIT: However, you're right. The sky doesn't show up behind her. o_o that part looks awkward.
    Last edited by lonemomo; 05-13-2007 at 05:32 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by death-angel View Post
    wow!! its really awesome...but you need to work on your coloring a little...but other than that i think its really great..keep practicing...and also keep up the good job.^_^

    For the drawing though, the low detail suits it quite well. I mean, the shirt is straight blue, but it looks good on the drawing. There isn't much you could have done to improve the clothing.

    There isnt much you could have done but created a layer for the sky and editted it behind the weave. Maybe smudge the clouds a bit.

    The colouring, I think, suits the picture.
    Last edited by lonemomo; 05-13-2007 at 05:35 PM.

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    I think it's fine. Just need more practice. There are people born with a gift of artistic talent,,, BUT they have to refine that talent. You can't just start and be perfect. I'm sure with more practice, you'll be doing Manga quality work in no time.

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    Quote Originally Posted by therebel View Post
    I think it's fine. Just need more practice. There are people born with a gift of artistic talent,,, BUT they have to refine that talent. You can't just start and be perfect. I'm sure with more practice, you'll be doing Manga quality work in no time.
    Finer lines and a better scan, maybe a little more detail and more lines for the shading...

    if it was just cleaned up a bit, i'd say you're well on your way.

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    the clothes were supposed to be black...but it made the unclean spots obvious...so the last solution: make it blue. I couldn't do a thing about the clothes. They were supposed to be stiff, but I edited it in PS 7...result: somewhat round effects and overlaps.

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