Umm... thanks I guess. Well, I was just 4 years old when I drew that. lol
Thanks for the comment, ore wa tenshi.
I'll post something again.
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Umm... thanks I guess. Well, I was just 4 years old when I drew that. lol
Thanks for the comment, ore wa tenshi.
I'll post something again.
Okay, this artwork is jus a sketch and i'm trying out different positions of each character. You might wanna see it "sideways" though. I forgot to landscape it.
UP THIRTEENTH
Description: Just a sketch, nothing serious.
Please comment on the character's positions. Thanks.
That's cute >_< Love the characters
Now for the criticism, that guy sitting with his hand on the girl's head is off proportions; you could either put his head smaller or his body a bit longer. The profile looks very good.
The fingers are a bit too long, but nothing of great consequence ^^
Apart from that, the positions are all nicely done and the drawing overall is very good!
Are you going to color it?
Oh and next time could you not post the drawing vertically? Pictures look different and sometimes even wrong if not seen in the right position.
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Heh, I'll remember to landscape it next time.
And for the coloring? Nah, I intended it to become a sketch anyway. No need to do it.
Well, I'm going to post something soon. I just gotta let my mom scan my artworks in her office until she buys me a new scanner. Woot!
Thanks for the comment ore.
Nice sketch!
But please,rotate before posting^^
Lets comment a bit:
I know I prmiced,but-fingers are really off...
But as it is nothing serious,that just might not be a problem...
Hmmmm...Postions are nice,some body part are off proportions and landscape has somewhat good effect(even though it's not really landscape)...
Ah,I see you're practicing on poses,very good^^
Keep up^^
huh? im so late you are on your 13th?? ahh!
okay.. okay..
11th art:
This would one of the best for my opinion.. the foot is just the off..
12th art:
that was.. cute..! for a Pre-K art.. -laugh- yes.. seriously.. kamusta na kayo?? etoh, mabuti naman.. hahaha..
13th art:
its kind of hard to look deeply in that position..
the fingers, looks.. weird. But hey! you tried.. n_n
I find the funny lil guy on the side, cute.. -laugh-
Its very nice..!
Keep it up!!
Last edited by zyronet; 05-17-2007 at 01:25 PM.
Not to bad kid. Check out my Art though. Especially my Itachi Uchiha artwork ^_-
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@ hamashimura - Yes, you're right. I'm practicing on poses so I will not draw something that's just standing there. lol
Anyway, I just forgot to rotate it. So my bad.
@ zyro - yeah well, I know you can understand that writing there lol. Hello Kamusta na kayo? haha
@ Armageddon - Thanks, I guess.
I'll post again later.
Last edited by maximillian_cross; 05-17-2007 at 01:24 PM.
Yea but your really good man, keep it up, the reason im good is because i've been drawining sincei was 6 years old lol. Keep it up kid you get really good over time, like they say, practice makes perfection ^_^
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@ Armageddon - Uhh, well I was practicing since I was 4 years old in Pre - K. lol Anyway, thanks for the advice.
Ugh, posting something new again.
Up Fourteenth:
Post comments please. Thanks.
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comments.. comments..
14th art:
the body is a bit off.. hips are quite small.. and the arm.. is a bit short..
but hey! I love the hair and the dress.. quite stylish for my opinion.. n_n
go! Kaya mo yan..! keep it up!!
Well dude i know you will get better, i was taught to draw by my mother, She does professional drawining for anime. ^_^
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@ zyro - Thanks for the comment again.
@ Armageddon - Oh really? Good for you. I actually just taught myself to draw. sigh...
Oh, and I'll be posting the remake of my "3rd Artwork" tomorrow. Stay tuned.
OMG i love your art is soo WOW!
Last edited by sakura280; 05-17-2007 at 05:04 PM.
lol Raven, I intend to make her breasts bigger but it'll not be proportioned to the body. haha
Anyway, I'm gonna post the makeover of my 3rd Art later.
Okay, here it is. The 3rd Artwork Makeover... or not. XD
UP Fifteenth
Description: Okay okay maybe it's not really a makeover since this girl is the big sis of Mei Mei in my 3rd Artwork.
Post comments please. Thanks.
Fourteenth: Hips as was already mentioned. Maybe that would give her a different look and the proportions wouldn't seem so off. Still I'm not sure if it's the body proportions... You draw the legs a bit too thin. But enough of criticism. I totally Love! her outfit. The design is just beautiful (and I won't mention the colors hehe)
Fifteenth: Again love her outfit and those hair accessories look pretty cool >_< Only thing that still needs some work - fingers.
"Just"... Now you think that's unfortunate? Learning to do something you like by yourself is one of those things that'll make you proud of yourself in the future, if it's not making you proud yet. No offense to Armageddon of course, but max, being good at something no one else taught you how to do is just the best feeling ^^ So keep on going >>
Looking forward for upcoming pictures~
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i love your Fifteenth art its realy cool and can you chow me hoe to draw bodys im realy realy bad at it T.T
comments, comments..
15th art:
-i love the dress and accessories..
-negative maybe the hands..
-is she smiling..?? ..cute!
Keep it up..!!
Okay, here's a new artwork of mine. I'm posting original artworks recently.
Up 16th
Post comments please. Thanks.
wow the 16th is great....especially the the wings..lol very cute...
also i love the color red and black...really nice...
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16th art:
-hmm.. the face is quite weird, the first thing i think thats negative..
-the tattered part of the dress looks cool but kind of confusing if you try to understand the flow..
-the feathers and the wings are great..
- youre always good at making original weapons.. nice.
Keep it up!! n_n
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