~Life Music~

[Tetsanosuke]

Fine tuned; a crimson soaring scroll
Of rampant tunes and songs of old
Such written to be heard again
Seems so bad but feels so good
Almost like a sin

The notes carried by the grace of air
Into our hearts through our ears we share
A common commotion deep inside
We feel the flow as we let worries divide

Get lost in the tune and move with the flow
Take in what muse it may abuse
Be sure to never let it go

Let your life slip into the past
As you take your cautious steps
In this world seemingly so vast

Become one with life's flavored tune
Take it in and let your sight resume,
As you wander the silver latent streets
You move to the music
By it's out spoken beat

Dance within your total being
Never cease to care
Caring shows you see the world
For more of what should be there.

And in this feeling of emotions flying
You'll feel the rhythm never dieing,
Though you'll feel your fear subsiding
Which is how it's meant to be

Go on and prance
The endless dance
Which is your life you'll see.

[Red&Stiletto]

Wow Tet, that was absolutely amazing! I can completely relate to that poem (though no one else around here seems to get it). Very good. Keep it up!

~*Lady

[Howling Star]

Wow Tet, that was absolutely amazing! I can completely relate to that poem (though no one else around here seems to get it). Very good. Keep it up!

~*Lady

It sure is good and more get it but it's that this forum is dying. Like look the viewed time and look the comments most are to lazy to even comment. I can comment and I mostly comment to new poets but I think it's just that it's hard to tell why you like that poem for most. So they don't post else its considered spam. On topic I like it =)

[Daenerys]

Closed for a few reasons.

1. The title is inappropriate. I don't allow extra characters or extra little squiggles to make the title POP, it's a scam to get people to read it, and I have never condoned rediculous looking subject lines.

2. Just because a poem is up for 3 days, doesn't mean you can declare the forum officially dead, and think it's okay to spam on a poem. I am bad repping you and giving you an infraction because you are NEVER ON TOPIC, and not only that, if you had posted JUST what you said about the poem. "I like it" You'd be getting warned for spam anyway.

So there you have it. Stop spamming, and stop being rude.