+Ookami's Scribbles+

[Ookie]

Just a random doodle of my RP char, I think she came out too grown up. o.o; well it's just a scribble but It will have to do for now, whad ya think then?

[Athena]

=o Ca-uuuute! <3
I like her outfit and LOVE her eyes. So gorguuuz, Ookie. =)

[Ookie]

Thankies love <3



If you read the comic, SSWARS. Then you know what I'm talking about in the above comic, if not... well then. Go view it. Done in photoshop, the line art with a messy inkpen. The idea ain't really original. I just substituted characters.

Tell me:

-What did I Do right?
-What did I do wrong?
-How awesome I am?
-How un-awesome I am?
-Others?

[MissBunBun]

OOO ookie i like this one..it kinda reminds me of what happened yesterday when i was painting my nails ;______; it was such a sad day because of that girl, anyway you did a wonderful job on it keep it up love <333

[unspun]

Ookami is awesome lol

I wish I had your talent, I can code things, but my stick figures wouldn't save a person's life.

[Ookie]

Oki this is a picture of me 'animetized', but of course I don't have that much of a chest. ^.~

It's me in my uniform, If anyone wants to be bothered in colouring take it and enjoy. I'm too lazy xD

Now what do you think? You'll have to say something anyway, or I won't post anymore art. -laughs evilly- o_0

[Sasaria_Genei_Ryodan]

The second pic you posted with the nail coloring was funny lol its cute and really nice shaing is good i like it the last ones good tho she has a bit of a problem with the body shape but anywayz its good post more soon ^^

[Gaarademon]

good stuff good stuff those are some awesome pictures dude

[Ookie]

Thank you for your views <3
Now here's another one, a request.

I'm afraid it's been resized, the original is much bigger.

[NiesaxShiori]

i think u should make manga right now...lol but awesome works..

[Nymia_san]

wow nice works!! love the 1st one on this page!! It's really cute!!

keep it up!!

[*Kayako*]

those are... CUTE. I like them, keep it up hun.

[Ookie]

Art attached. C&C?

1: Fanart - Lucky Star
2: Request - Secret Police Wolfgirl
3: Fanart - SSWARS
4: Random Scribble

[UrusaiSevera]

OOKIE!!!! your scribbles are awsome!! And I love the comments you give add to them!!

I especially like the last one in your last post.... the claws on that thing o.O...

Keep up the good stuff and I'll keep an eye on this thread!!

<3 Urusai

[.Lovebeat]

Ookami, everything's so cute, really good work :3
I <3 the Elven girl or whoever she is, on top of the page. I just love ears like that. xD She's really cute.
You're really good with drawing face expressions!
One thing I personally don't like is how their faces looks too... "square"-like, at least the latest ones... If you wanna change it, make it more... soft and well... round, like your current signature image. But yeah, that's what I personally think.
Good work and keep it up!

[Sanosuke23]

Seeing as how it's #23, I feel I should comment. ^^

All in all for a random doodle it isn't so bad. The blade I like especially. However...


... There are some things wrong. The shirt looks like it was buttoned wrong, which isn't really a bad thing I just dunno if that was your intent. It adds to the whole unlikely doom scenario, though. Also, her torso is waaayyyy too short, and it looks kinda like you did it to fit her in the pic. Speaking of, her right foot(our left) should be a bit further back, and her left foot(our right) looks like she has a broken ankle judging by the way the rest of her leg is bent. Speaking of, her right leg should be bent like her left, as it stands now she's got one leg longer than the other.

Not a problem, but I can only assume she's bouncing up and down by the pose and the position of the weapon. Am I right? :3



Sorry if this comes off harsh, I mean it as constructive criticism and even though it's a random doodle the fact that you made a background and everything for it leaves it open for serious review. I do like your work and think you should keep it up, so get to it! I've seen you do better in this very thread! :P


Oh, also in #21, I like the Kyo pic a lot. I also like the top half of the first pic, but again there's a distinct lack of pelvis. :P The second pic is good, I like the attempt at cross-legged sitting(something I can't do in the slightest btw) and the boa but I would try to move her head a little to (our) left.

As for #28, the only issues I can see are that she has a very small right arm, and that is a very unnatural pose for doing one's fingernails. It looks stiff. The actual lines and everything are great though, and again you're trying to do something you haven't done and I like that you at least try.



EDIT: #38... the last pic... is that at least based off of a certain Breath of Fire III piece I attatched?

[Ookie]

Yup it is XD Sano, thanks for your views everyone.

[Sasaria_Genei_Ryodan]

Man that sure aint no scribles there reallly good i liked the tiger its awesome n the colored tiger and that cute little girl !!!!!!!!!

[Ookie]

Another doodle, it's a bit small I think o_0, but I find these look better smaller xD



C &C?

[♥Ritsuka♥]

awww its super cute, one thing is try and put more details in the eyes :3

[Sanosuke23]

The eyes have been mentioned, but more specifically I would make the iris smaller. Since it's in B&W it's gonna be hard to see anyway, but that huge lump of black is what kills the detail.

Also, the lump on her right(our left) sleeve seems out of place. Maybe you should have redrew that section of the arm before finalizing it? :3

It's still adorable though, and I wonder what it is they'll never know. I suspect something mischievous. ^_~

[Ookie]

Thanks people for your views, yea sano.. You're right about the eyes, it does look pretty stupid now xD.

Attached: a picture requested from a friend a looong time ago, I knida found it lying around in My -unsorted and neglected- Pictures folder. o_0

Also here, in case it did' work. Attachments hate meh ;.;





DO NOT ASK

[Sasaria_Genei_Ryodan]

AWWW that little girl is like soo cute rite the eyes have been mentioned already ... not much to say just ..... the wolf iis JUST AWESOME !!!!!! its reall y cool i like black wolves the're nice and real dark ^^ hehehehehe ok am now like goin to go and hit my head .......... anywayz great work ^^

[Kain]

That second picture looks like my mental image of teed.

[Sanosuke23]

I like the wolf. Animal anatomy is something I need to work on, because I don't have the slightest idea how to do it properly. ;-;

Of course, it also means I can't critique it properly, because I don't know WHAT to critique. ^^;;


And that other pic... just lol. I love the subject matter. It's obviously not a serious pic so I won't be all "omg critz 2 teh maxx!", but next time I would switch the dark and light colors on the shirt. Color is always serious business! ;P