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    Default my first poem.

    here it goes, my first poem. I do not have a title though! I plan on using this in another story of mine. LMK what you think!

    Out of the darkness
    heroes spring;
    no matter what
    the future brings.

    If you don't want to follow
    you're destined to lead;
    so sound the charge
    and do your deed.

    Accept who you are
    and forget your past;
    look to the future
    for your life will change in a flash.

    Stay close to your enemies
    and beware your friends;
    don't end up like Jesus
    defend yourself until the end.

    Like a modern Judas
    you will be betrayed;
    you will be on the run
    but your quest isn't done.

    They may betray you for gold
    they may betray you for power;
    it doesn't matter,
    if you survive you'll be less of a coward.

    Continue forward
    don't look back;
    pick up your sword
    and prepare to attack.

    Outnumbered
    outfought;
    don't fight the fight
    your enemies plot.

    Your deed shall be great
    for courage shall be found;
    the Last March of Man
    will it go out without a sound?

    Or will it roar in a blaze of glory
    remembered for eternity;
    make your enemies sorry
    for wanting to fight.

    They come howling forward
    these freaks, these orcs;
    they thirst for your blood
    so you shall kill somemore.

    You shall not pass!
    you say;
    and you hold the bridge,
    but if you fall, it will end that day.

    You will be wounded
    you will be cut;
    but you'll fight on
    from dawn till dusk.

    But the enemy will keep coming
    and you may fall;
    but your comrades will keep fighting
    for the good of all.

    But if you fight on
    hope and courage will enter their hearts;
    for glory and for victory
    force the enemy back to the desert!

    This is your destiny
    like it or not;
    so sorry,
    I know it wasn't what you sought.
    Nøytral
    følelsesløs
    Min logikk kretser
    Blir skadet
    Ved en landeplage av følelser!
    Hva kan jeg gjøre?
    Alt jeg trodde jeg var ...
    Jeg er blitt mer.
    Mer menneske; et annet cog i maskinen av livet.
    Hvorfor kan jeg nyte dette?
    Jeg er så forvirret ...

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    Hmm this is my first comment on a poem. =X Hmm what to say I like it I mean this cause I dont care about my post counts. I mostly post here sometimes in misc or in anime discusions. But I like it nice rhymes where in it.

    Greetz Train

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