Deathstarrs' New sig

[Hakosho]

I made a sig and I think it turned out ok. Leave me some feedback.

[wizz-o-matic]

first of all, include the sig in your post

[Hakosho]

Sorry lol, THis is my first time useing VB, I use IPB. I thought it woud show up....anything good or bad about it?

[elfenstein]

Hmm, first of all, I think you use too many characters in it. It's overloaded, especially since there isn't any connection between the charas. Neither from theme, position, size, color or anything.
It is also still a bit bland overall. Try to make it more interesting by adding a more complex bg, some patterns or brushes, for example.
The extraction on the chara second from left is lacking, you can still see a bright outline around her.

Anyway, it's not bad, but has still much room for improvement.

Have fun,
Elfenstein.