another death poem

[Black Ace]

Sometimes I wonder,
Why be afraid of death?
Each day that passes you
by in life brings you a step loser
to death.
Death might be standing right
next to you, waiting for the right
moment to let you know it's there.
One day it will be right at your
front door,
So don't be surprised when
you get that knock.

[Serae]

I think it's a nice poem. ^.^ But, I couldn't really feel it. I think you should put more heart and soul into your poetry. And maybe make it rhyme a little here and there. Anyways, keep up the good work. =)