This darkness

[Howling Star]

Short and bad>.< need inspiration>.<

Stil walking trough evryting
Feeling the pain it wil sing
Its singing its victory
And I can feel and see

Its killing me
And I cant flee
Its like hes saying hows youre sorow
Its someintg you cant borow

Its just a curse
Just like geting all out of youre purse
I feel like im geting stalked
This is the last time I walked

The street is so long
Wil I make it or wil the pain make a end to its song?

[Daenerys]

Instead of trying so hard to write things fast, and spam the forum. Why don't you spend more time on punctuating and making the post make sense? Every thread of yours I've read is hard to read and it doesn't make sense. You need to learn how to type and write, before you can write.

[Akamaru_Luvr14128]

Ever written poems about things youve dreamt about? that could be a really good insperation. And I agree with Jack, try looking about your speling before you post. It makes more sense. And instead of doing sorrow (though I love that kind) Try like asking questions in your poem. Lol, well, maybe, the questions isn't THAT good of a thing, but mix things around a little bit. And when you rhyme do things instead of
"Stil walking trough evryting
Feeling the pain it wil sing" add a sentence between it that doesn t rhyme with everything or sing (sting?)
Still walking through everything
Questions pounding in my head
Feeling the pain it will sting.

Or something like that. Not that bad like I did mine lol. >.<

[Hamashimura]

It's not so bad,but you really should spend more time on typing lessons...

[Akamaru_Luvr14128]

*nods in agreement with hamashimaru*

[ishakak]

Yeah.... er umm I have an idea, Is there something going on in your life or something that you wish would happen? If so you could write about that.
Or maybe you could ( for practice ) take another poem and modify or something to fit how you would like it, like the one that you just wrote.