The Girl

[Red&Stiletto]

Sullen but sincere

Quiet yet content

Lovely in all ways

Though her ways are bent

She never crys at night

Never sheds a tear

For she holds No one dear

She feels no pain

Even though shes sane

She pulls the trigger

And flys away

[Cat_Demon]

It is a very short poem, but holds power to it. I loved it, and I wish you would write more. It seems to simple to me but very meaningful.

[Moonstar24]

I think its awsome! A very strong meaning! I think you should become a poet when you grow up! You'll go far!

[Red&Stiletto]

Well, thank you all. Very kind words. ^_^

[Zan Voaga]

Well done, very nice. Needs a bit more length to it but it's still pretty good and it does add power to the words despite how short it is.

[Daenerys]

Eeehhh... I didn't like it. It was too short, it didn't have enough meaning or power for me. It just didn't grab me, give me visuals.