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    I hope this thread doesn't get closed, I read the rules and Jack Skellington's thread *you should probably read it too if you keep getting closed*
    This is one of my poem I wrote for Alter and I don't know if he'll even know I wrote it for him. I hope I followed the rules....here it goes.

    Savior:

    Monnlight bathes the earth as you hold me in your arms.

    In my ear, you wisper those words no one but you have ever told me.

    Because I am different, you accepted me when no one else would.

    Times stops right then and there with your tender touch and gentle kiss.

    Over and over they taunt me for being me.

    Taste the tears that flow down my cheeks as I drop down, kneeling in the midst of my pain.

    A warmth rushes through me as I am lifted up by my savior,

    My savior is you.....

    I love you.


    This is for you Alter.
    Last edited by Sensei; 11-01-2006 at 04:31 PM. Reason: Misspelling



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    I rather liked that poem.
    Better then I could ever do.
    It's really great.

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    Not bad...I liked the dark yet love-like mood of the poem. I'd love to see more work from you...

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    That was very pretty and sentimentally beautiful. (if that even makes sense)

    I adore your line, "Over and over they taunt me for being me."

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