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[Howling Star]

Poem Path

The path that i take.
Its the path that i chose.
Its the path for my own sake.
Its a path i cant afford to looze.

I have to keep it with me.
I have to keep it safe.
Cause there are so much things i wanna see.
I cant afford it to walk in a cave.

Cause i wil get lost and wont get out.
No one wil here me there.
Even if i scream out loud.
I cant put up a flare.

So i have to walk.
I cant complain.
I cant stop for some talk.
Maybe its driving me insane.

[DarkMoonPrince]

This one's pretty good, alot less typo's and this one seems pretty serious.

[Howling Star]

I made it when mine pc was dieing but now hes alright lol. Thanks for the comment. I like it when people like wat i make. And about those typo's im learning.

[Old_Toonami_Fangirl]

*smiles* pretty good. keep up the good work.

[Red Pyramid]

Rather good....