Slightly Hollow

[otakuyume]

*Mmm...! I'm still on a darkling streak...But I haven't written a majority of "happy poems" in my time as a member of this forum. LOL. This little creation is another one of my half-alive half-in-reality inklings of the mind. Have you ever had a day where you feel you're not "all there" or simply..."Slightly Hollow"? Well...This poem is for you.*

*Dedicated to the world's slowly vanishing souls...I see you...Come back through the looking glass...Shadows don't suit you.*

Oct 3, 2006 at 11:52 pm

Slightly Hollow

Broken heart where can you be?
Shattered and scattered which blind eyes cannot see.
Chained hands reach without avail...
Bloodless and loveless contained in skin so pale.

Half a mind and a mind so rotten...
Twisted and torn, I am but forgotten.
Silence this deadman's voice in its throat.
Tears to a river become a corpse afloat.

Slighty hollow, not here nor there...
Simply amissed by society's vicous stare...
Tear this life asunder for I will not care...
Because living so tornly is more than I can bear...

[Middy]

Wonderful Poem. I think a lot of people have had a "Slightly Hollow" day before. Keep writing.. I hope to see more, dark or happy.

[otakuyume]

Thank you all so very much! Here's the first page of links to other poems I have on this forum. If you wish to see more I will post the other links as well in the future. I love hearing people's thoughts and opinons so feel free to post.

Everyone's views are a fragment to this eye of mine...Help it see the true world. -^_^-


1.http://www.animeforum.com/showthread.php?t=49882

2.http://www.animeforum.com/showthread.php?t=49703

3.http://www.animeforum.com/showthread.php?t=49555

4.http://www.animeforum.com/showthread.php?t=48947

5.http://www.animeforum.com/showthread.php?t=48413

6.http://www.animeforum.com/showthread.php?t=48372

7.http://www.animeforum.com/showthread.php?t=48193

8.http://www.animeforum.com/showthread.php?t=46427

9.http://www.animeforum.com/showthread.php?t=46652

10.http://www.animeforum.com/showthread.php?t=46592

11.http://www.animeforum.com/showthread.php?t=46574

12.http://www.animeforum.com/showthread.php?t=46521

13.http://www.animeforum.com/showthread.php?t=45125

14.http://www.animeforum.com/showthread.php?t=44930

15.http://www.animeforum.com/showthread.php?t=44844

16.http://www.animeforum.com/showthread.php?t=44780

17.http://www.animeforum.com/showthread.php?t=44586

[Demonic Ice Dragon]

Otaku.
You know you write beautiful poems, yes?
I think you stalk me, a'cause this poem seems so much like me on most days.
-Lick. Stalk. Love.- <3
Eye el yew, gurlfrenduh. xD
Keep up the good work, lovely. =D

(Side note; You think I should post my latest fanfiction? O.o; The VxI one? IM me on MSN and tell me. >_<)

[Skyla_G]

Wow... this gives me... flourishing inspiration >.< You're so talented Otaku-oni-chan!

The first paragraph... how do I describe this... it's like 'beyond dejavu'... make any sense? Duuuuude. I'm shaking with ummm excitement.... ya know like when you're watching a suspenseful movie? I'd love you to read my newest poem and give me constructive critisism and insight. But I can't open threads... my computer is messed up that way... >.<

~Skyla-chan xoxo [thank you for posting]