Anyone?

[Vendetta]

Does anyone hear my silent cries,
Or does no one see past these awful lies?
Does anyone see my invisible tears,
Or do they all hide behind their childish fears?
Does anyone notice I'm not here,
Or am I to them petty and mere?

Is there anywhere that I can stay in peace?
Somewhere that I mustn't rent or lease?
Is there anywhere for me that's safe,
Shall I forever be a lonesome waif?
Is there anywhere to be my home,
Or Forever will I stray and roam?

You're the one that heard my cries,
Quickly, saw past those awful lies,
That soft touch faded my invisible tears,
Never would you show any fears,
You're sad whenever I'm not here,
You wouldn't let me feel petty and mere.

In you're arms was my place of peace,
Never again will my hope decrees,
You're kiss makes me always feel safe,
I shall not again be a lonesome waif,
You're heart forever will be my home,
Apart I and my sadness has grown.....
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Thankies for reading! Toodles!

[Daimastuny]

Very sad poem indeed, but very well done. Has a nice flow and good choice of words. Great work Vendetta, keep on writing.

<3ies, ~dai

[Vendetta]

Thanks you! I actaully had to look up one word!

[LittleMomo]

^ ^ Pretty good Vendetta-san ^ ^ Keep it up!

[Vendetta]

Gracias lucky! and when did I become Vendetta-san because Bluefox always called me Detta-Chan... But, yea.... Uhm thankies for commenting!

[Skyla_G]

Wow. I enjoy how the saddness is folded, you change the ending so it's not completely sad. There's an odd type of imagry where in the first verse say "silent cries" and "invisible tears". To wipe away a tear that isnt visible a person must be really empathetic<3 Very expressive poetry. Keep up the great work!
~Skyla

[Vendetta]

Why, thank you. Usually for my poetry the ending doesn't match the poem much. I tend to made the ending happy, because what is the point of a poem like this?

I'm so sad,
No one can see,
Even when I'm mad,
no one can see,
no matter what,
no one can see.....

And that would be the end. I mean, it's not interesting because it's just TOO darn depressing. Every now and then I switch it up, start with love.... then turn it to sadness.... (just look at my other poems, if you want, and youw ill notice the pattern!)

[*unshed~tears*]

Sad but very good. Keep up the good work.

[Water Wolf]

WOW! *apladues* that is AWESOME poetry! dang! really really good keep it up and keep it going!

[skater2791]

really good vendetta......i hope to see more from u^^

[Heartless Soul Eater]

very very good