Words

[Black Nymph]

-Words-

Sticks and stones can break my bones
But words can hurt me more.
They're like a vast black ocean of ink
Casting them on the shore.
Pressed between pages forever, doomed to gather dust.
That's not the way great words should live, they should live on in us.
Poems, stories, pleasure things
But to all, a deeper meaning.
The good words, the poems, they come from the heart
Gorgeous words are truely an art.

By Black Nymph

Help make sure gorgeous words aren't a LOST art.
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Critisism will be accepted, I've always been able to take it before. Please, though, comment. I want to know if it's good or not.
Thank you.

[Daenerys]

To be completely honest, this is terrible. All you did was take catch phrases and meld them together. That's not art, that's not poetry. It's not anything. You lack the ability to be original. You write about things you don't practice. You talk of deeper meanings but your poem lacked depth and meaning.

[Black Nymph]

whatever. I don't want people to lie about it, that's for sure. This was definatly not one of my good poems, provided I have any in the first place.

[Daenerys]

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Critisism will be accepted, I've always been able to take it before. Please, though, comment. I want to know if it's good or not.
Thank you.

For one who says you can handle it, you sure are incapable.

[Black Nymph]

I've critisism before, and everyone will always have a different opinion. If you were stuck with my class for six hours a day, you'd be used to it.