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Scarlet Flowers
Blossoming in scarlet flowers, dancing against the blackest night.
Casting lilting, shifting shadows in the silver sweet moonlight.
By Black Nymph
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Please comment!! I can take critisism, I guess. After all, I've taken it before.
Last edited by Fabala; 07-19-2008 at 01:07 AM. Reason: removed text color
its great. kinda short dont ya think? anyway great poem
-Just tell me baby, Tell me I'm crazy, You know it's what makes your heart scream "Take me"..-Mithrosent
yes yes, I know, short, but it came to me as inspiration, and I can't TRY to tack something else onto it once I'm done. *Sigh* I have such a complicated hobby...
Oh wow, it's so short. Yet every word in a poem makes it's structure no matter it's length. Wonderful by the way. I admire your substitution for common words.
*bows* why thank you. I big vocabulary comes in handy, think so?
Playing with my shadow
Is more than meets the eye
My shadow is my keeper
There by and by.
Shadows are more dangerous
Than one might ever think.
They're everywhere yet nowhere at all
Playing on the brink.
People say shadows are harmless
I beg to contradict.
Shadows are everywhere and hence know everything
Including what makes you tick.
My shadow knows your weaknesses
Your strengths and habits too.
Because of what my shadow tells me
I know everything about you.
I don't think it was anything spectacular. It was two lines that rhymed, but once again, they held no meaning, they didn't hold emotions.
The poem was short but every word in it was enticing and enchanting I would say. (^_^)
----------[Daughty|Fafnir|Faffy|iMud|iSi|Koko|KoKoBear|Kokolo ve|Kokolay|Kokonaut|Kokosterious|Money|Monmon|Musi c Buddeh]--------------------Credit goes to Mac for(indirectly) encouraging me to do graphic designing again. You're the best. <3----------
thank you. I apprieciate it.
Playing with my shadow
Is more than meets the eye
My shadow is my keeper
There by and by.
Shadows are more dangerous
Than one might ever think.
They're everywhere yet nowhere at all
Playing on the brink.
People say shadows are harmless
I beg to contradict.
Shadows are everywhere and hence know everything
Including what makes you tick.
My shadow knows your weaknesses
Your strengths and habits too.
Because of what my shadow tells me
I know everything about you.
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