Sadness

[Daenerys]

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[FarEastStyle]

That sounds like it could be a verse from a LP song. I like it, I wanted to read more but its too short =(
Add s'more to it.

[Daenerys]

I hate Linkin Park.

And yeah, I usually don't really write short poems. I don't think I'm going to add onto this one though. If I think of anything, I'll edit it.

[Ookie]

Lovely poem... could be a bit longer though...

[Astalle]

If you think about it though, poems really don't need to be specified lengths ^_^

It's a very good poem Brody, Hope to see more soon ^_^

[Daenerys]

I added a few more lines that came to me.

I don't think I could do anything else to the poem to make it better. So it is finished.

[FarEastStyle]

Yes it is complete now, (I take back the thing about LP)

[~Mithrosent~]

its short but had meaning which makes up for the shortness. i like your poems. i need to see more!

[the_last_icarian]

It's depressing, but it's pretty neat. Has a nice rhythm to it. Keep it up

[Breibhinn]

I think that's a great poem. I really liked it.

[Boredom~]

The last sentence is kinda scary but it goes with the poem ( in a good way.) Over all i liked it.