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    The Difference

    I got up early one morning,
    and rushed into the day;
    I had so much to accomplish
    that I didn't have time to pray.
    Problems just tumbled about me,
    and heavier came each task;
    "Why doesn't God help me?"
    I wondered.
    He answered, "You didn't ask."

    I wanted to see joy and beauty,
    but the day toiled on gray
    and bleak;
    I wondered why God didn't
    show me the way.
    He said, "But you didn't seek."
    I tried to come into God's
    presence; I used all my
    keys at the lock.
    God gently and lovingly chided,
    "My child, you didn't knock."

    I woke up early this morning
    and paused before entering
    the day; I had so much to
    accomplish that I had to
    take time to pray.
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    It's a good poem... . But shouldn't this be on the Fan Fiction Board-thing?

    EDIT-Oh, it moved boards... Ok!
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    Its really good! And i love it when the poem rhymes~

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    Your writing style is a really good one ^^ I don't like the God theme, but that's just me, to each his own. Anyway, I hope to see more from you because you have a lot of writing potential.

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