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Original Fiction: Vanguard Rising - Chapter 2
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Last edited by AngelofDreams; 11-14-2011 at 09:15 PM.
I dwell in your dreams,
I sleep the back of your mind.
This was a great chapter, I like a bit of mystery in a story. You are doing pretty good, with the female character, but I too am a guy so what do I know. Anyway, can't wait to read chapter three.
Hurray! A reply!
I dwell in your dreams,
I sleep the back of your mind.
I really liked the chapter...it's all so mysterious and I like how you described the thoughts of Tari...you are very talented...Even if it was a little hard for me to read (just because my native language is not English) it caught my attention from the start. Keep it up..you are doing a great job! And yeah you are getting feminine stuff right, at least in my opinion.
Thanks Nespa for the sign!
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