Winter

[Temari]

Something that I thought at the top of my head. xD


It's 12 in the night
I watch outside my window sleeply
Waitting for the first snowfall to happen
I notice small specks of white fall down
I rub my eye's then I look again..
It was only a dream.
I try to keep my eye's open as I wait
I hear the clock going tick tock tick tock
My eye's start to get droopy
No! I must stay awake
I rest my chin on the window sill then..
Could It be what I've been waitting for?
I watch in amazement as the snow slowly fall's down to the ground
I quickly ran outside with only socks and my PJ's and start to play in the snow
I lay down in the snow and start to make a snow angel
Mhmm, I look up in the sky and smile
Ah, The first day of winter has come

[DarkMoonPrince]

It's pretty good if you thought of it from the top of your head, But if you like writing, I know you will improve.

[halcyon23]

its good kept up the hard work

[INULOVERGIRL]

loved the poem it really reminds me of how anxious i get when it's winter.....i want it to be winter already o i can drink hot chocolate and be cozy.....anyway i kind'a doz<ed of there sorry but anyways great poem i luv it

[Temari]

Thanks you guys for havin the time to read my poem, that was not my best. But my best poem would have to be called "Always Be there" I don't remember if I posted it up or not, I'll have to check. But thank's again for the compliments. ^^

[dna_angel]

Pretty Cool! Nice poem! Good Job! Keep up the good work.