Shout

[Fuu Kasumi]

I shout your name.
You just stand there.
Are you playing some sort of game?
Or do just not care?

I shout to him,
He continues walking.
What's he plan to win,
By pretending he's talking?

I walk up to you,
Ask you how you are..
You look at me like you never knew,
Who I am, and get in your car.

I call your cell,
You don't answer.
I thought "Am I in hell?"..
"If not, then why won't he answer?".

Such friends we were,
Yet you don't hear me..
Then I saw her.

You put me on silence,
And locked me out..
To let her in since,
I made you want to shout..

Yet, lovers agree to disagree,
Like you and me,
but you and her disagree to agree.
...How could this be?

-- Comments please. <3

[LittleMomo]

I like how it rhymes, but some of the parts got me confused, but it's okay ^ ^ it was good in the end anyway. Keep it up.

[BlackLanternTL]

are you carrie white of BMS

[.mystic]

a few bits, i think, were a little forced with rhyming, otherwise it was well written. the rhyming was also good except for a few parts. hope to see more writing from you <3

[BlackLanternTL]

sorry for the mix-up. it seems like something she'd write. it's pretty nice

[Sakura Holic]

It's a nice poem. It has a rhyme to it also. I like the flow. Keep it up.