You Promised

[Sakura Holic]

I wish we'd never meet.
I want you out,
I loved you for so long,
And yet you treat me,
Like dirt!
I waited for you,
For a long time.
But you didnt dare,
Say a word.
Instead,
You chatted,
With your girlfriend.
For the whole week.
Never dared to say,
Anything to me,
Or your so called FRIENDS.
This isnt like you at all.
What have you become?
You promised to call us,
Mail or E Mail us,
When you get there.
Instead,
You cared for your selfish needs.
YOU!
ARENT A TRUE FRIEND,
AT ALL!
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This is a story about a boy and a girl. The girl likes this boy but the boy doesnt like her.... (uh oh.... ) so instead...they became friends. But when the guy has to move...he made a promise to email or w/e all of his friends and her...and you can pretty much guess what.
Although I pretty think this is a crazy poem. I wrote it long time ago. Enjoy!

Strong poem you got there sakura, I really like it. Keep writing, I'd be looking foward to reading more of them. ^ ~!

[BlazingSoul]

Ouch that's gotta hurt. Anyway the poem is great. Good Job

[Chariza]

That's a great poem Sakura,

keep up the good work,

can't wait to hear more.

[Sakura Holic]

Thanks. I wouldnt thought It would be that good. ^ ^
Thank You for the wonderful comments.

[Ms. Lucy]

Showing some anger and hate in this poem.
I like it.

[Sakura Holic]

Thank You for reading my poem Ketsueki. ^ ^

[.mystic]

There is alot of emotion in this poem, mostly suggesting anger and hatred. Did this really happen? I can write poems with alot of emotion and it still ins't real. >.<

[Sakura Holic]

Yes. It's based on a true story. On my friend.

[Warrior5thelement]

Wow that was god Sakura Great job on it keep up the good work.

[Sakura Holic]

Thank You So Much. And, I will. ^ ^

[sauske i love you]

thats a really cool poem, i enjoy writting poems also so maybe we can read each others work sometime

[Bucky Katt]

I'm reading this poem and listening to 'Where'd You Go' by Fort Minor, and I have to say, both combined together make me want to cry.
I'll take a guess that you were the girl in the poem?
Anyway, awesome job, and I hope to see more soon. <3

[Sakura Holic]

Lol
Thanks everyone. And no Sayako. I'm not the girl
xD

[Daenerys]

I'm reading this poem and listening to 'Where'd You Go' by Fort Minor, and I have to say, both combined together make me want to cry.
I'll take a guess that you were the girl in the poem?
Anyway, awesome job, and I hope to see more soon. <3

That's the song I thought about when I read it.

[Sakura Holic]

Wow. Lol.
Thanks for reading my poem Princess Ai. ^ ^

[Serenith Youkai]

It is a very nice poem, it reminds me of what happens all the time in my old school.
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[Sakura Holic]

Aw. Thanks for the rate. ^ ^
And Thank You for reading my poem.