Missing you

[LittleMomo]

I miss you so,
even if it was a second,
I miss you already,
if you leave me,
it's like forever,
when you left,
you're like my star,
the brightest one,
and if you go away,
who will be the one,
that will shine me,
when the dark comes,
every night of my life,
most of all,
I miss you here,
being with me always,
it's not the same,
when you're not here at all,
I feel so empty,
when you're gone for a day,
but when you come back,
I feel so great,
and feel like I was alive again,
please stay with me,
don't ever leave me,
because if you do,
I'll always miss you.
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enjoy everyone ^ ^

[Aleyna]

awww i really like this poem lucky!!!
its sad but its so cute, especially when u described that she is your star, good idea

[Sakura Holic]

Aw.. Its a really emotional poem Lucky. I enjoyed it.
Hope you make more. ^ ^

Great poem JFL, keep them coming. I really liked your poem, it's sweet. Keep writing.

[_CTA_]

awww... as always, ur poem is so sweet!! ^^

keep it up!!

ur poem fan, Miyu