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    Lightbulb Born with Pride and Light

    hi im back again and i dont know if this poem is good or not i hope u guys like it and that it makes to sense to yall. well enjoy

    Born with Pride and Light

    The light was shining
    I saw it coming
    I was there standing
    it was marvelously touching
    The atmosphere surrounding
    The earth as if like it had a wing
    It was something
    That was worth of seeing
    Even if it meant dying
    It was marvelously toughing
    The atmosphere surrounding
    The earth as if like it had a wing
    This is the best day of all living
    To the earth crust shining
    It was digging
    It was deepening
    For something it was looking
    It was disappearing
    From earth’s crust it was shooting
    It again was appearing
    It was marvelously touching
    The atmosphere surrounding
    The earth as if like it had wings
    On the top it was carrying
    Something that was delighting
    It self was watching
    So it wouldn’t be falling
    It was marvelously touching
    The atmosphere surrounding
    The earth as if like it had a wing
    It also was shining
    With its beautifulness pounding
    It was tall and sprouting

    well i hope yall enjoyed it and that u yall leave comments telling me ur openiuons ( wah >.< cant ever spell) thnx for yall's time.
    *lost in the world of broken and dead hearts,
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    confused by how foolish i am ,
    wanting to disappear in my world alone with ones who care for me,
    is that forbidden to ask that-tell me someone*





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    Honestly I didn't understand what it was about. I mean the title kind of threw me off. But, I liked the way you used words I guess.
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    i know it doesnt make sense that much i kinda left to my imagination to like a tree growing or something. but considring that i was dying of bordem when i wrote this its good lol. thnx though for the comment. ^.^
    *lost in the world of broken and dead hearts,
    traped in the mist of ones who lied,
    confused by how foolish i am ,
    wanting to disappear in my world alone with ones who care for me,
    is that forbidden to ask that-tell me someone*





    sig by Nespa thank u so much ur awsome !!! lol ^.^
    the famous Crimson Soul the best stalker ever

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    I may not understand this poem but I do honestly like it.




    *Doggy wanna run cause he wanna hear more of your poems.*

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    i dont really understand it either but it sounds great and wonderful i really like if you make more i will read them they are very good

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    It was hard to understand at first but I think I got the message, very cool, and interesting, i'm not sure but it seemed like there were a few typos, however none the less, I really did enjoy reading this poem. Keep up the good work! I look forward to reading more of your poetry, and anaconda, cool poem! you too keep up the good work you both make good poets^^

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    thnx guys that helped me lots ^.^
    *lost in the world of broken and dead hearts,
    traped in the mist of ones who lied,
    confused by how foolish i am ,
    wanting to disappear in my world alone with ones who care for me,
    is that forbidden to ask that-tell me someone*





    sig by Nespa thank u so much ur awsome !!! lol ^.^
    the famous Crimson Soul the best stalker ever

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    i really liked it alot!!!!!

    i thought it was a tree!!!

    i could read that poem again and again, it was so interesting,it made you wonder wut it was n then u told us at the very end thats a good technique

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    I liked it, I thought it was a tree? What the hell?
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    i didnt quite get it at first^^; but i did enjoy it it was very nice!^_^

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