These Are the Feelings

**Demon Hunter Dante** · 06-14-2006 12:11 AM

A relationship that was not to long.
Given no time to make it grow strong.
Maybe the two of us just don't belong.
These are the feelings when it all goes wrong.
The tears, the fears, and no help from your peers.
These are the feelings that are here.
Happiness, Passion, and the love I hold dear.
Those were the feelings that were never near.
The more I think about this makes me wanna cry.
These tears i shed makes me wanna die.
I only wish away from this world I could fly.
These are the feelings when your living a lie.
When all this happened I can admit I was mad.
But now that I think I am only sad.
Maybe this decision can make you glad.
Because these are the feelings when you think of what you could've had.

**Aleyna** · 06-14-2006 12:24 AM

u r very good at rhyming!!! sounds like u could be a good song writer!!! i wanna see more works of yours

**Demon Hunter Dante** · 06-16-2006 11:51 PM

With this one i wrote about a week long relationship i had with a girl that i thought liked me...

**animeangellover** · 06-27-2006 12:21 PM

nice poem! you make rhyming seem so easy!^^;

**Yukari** · 06-27-2006 12:55 PM

Very sad *cry* It ws very well writen though. It flowed very well

**Demon Hunter Dante** · 06-30-2006 02:34 AM

Thank you very much...It is not that easy as it seems to make these rhyme!!! But i try thank you...If you like this one read my others just look for them! They are posted!