Going Hunting

[Fabala]

Again, I'm generally not a poetry writer. No longer. This is another poem that I deemed "okay" enough to share.

Going Hunting

Pools of blood staining the autumn ground,
Unspoken words: "Good work!"
when the deed is done.
An empty shell,
-still warm-
With eyes of shimmering gold
-frozen-
Fixed upon the parting heavens,
And weeping of dry tears.

[LittleMomo]

O.o Never seen you make a poem before. lol Anyway, great job on the poem even though it's short. ^_^

[Fabala]

Nothing wrong with short, I say ;p Thanks.

[Keitaru-san]

its not the lengh of it matters, its the depth of it and its content.
anyways nice poem...your good at poems i didn't know.

what you know rei is full of surprises.

[Astalle]

Good poem ^.^