My Artwork (enjoy ^_^)

**Taikyo** · 07-31-2005 10:29 PM

welp, i just finished inking this drawing in a couple days ago. I haven't put in the screen tones yet, but i'll will soon. and it'll have that lovely moment feeling to it. Anyways, please rate it and tell me what you think. I need to improve my art as much as i can. XD Don't worry about my feelings, just go on with the criticizing!

The second one..welp i need help with that one. Im haven't a hard time with the guy's face. (the one thats glomping the other guy). Not sure what to do with his face. =/ help plz. Also what to put in the dialouge.

Much Mahalo. =3

P.S - Oh a heads up, the second drawing is a Yoai pic k. ^^;

**♣Lukydemongirl♣** · 07-31-2005 10:51 PM

wow that is real good i sure wish i could draw like that

**Taikyo** · 07-31-2005 10:53 PM

Thanks. Its sort of easy to draw. Its the style that you draw is kind of hard to find. But i really do need help with the second pic. If you wouldn't mind and help me out with it. ^^;

**helba** · 07-31-2005 11:08 PM

very good pictures

**Tsuna Kadiri** · 07-31-2005 11:16 PM

+__+ ... VERY nice. <3 ... I had no idea you were that good. I'm really impressed. Your able to draw hands flawlessly.. that's amazing. Hands are so hard for me to draw. ><

I'm too tired to criticize right now.. ^^;; .. I'll post my thoughts/suggestions later. I just wanted to tell you how good I thought you were before I went to bed.. hehe.

**Taikyo** · 08-01-2005 02:52 AM

O.o i thank you guys for posting how good the pics are, but i reeally need a feedback on the 2nd one. I want to finish it before i go buy my screen tone sheets. So I'm all happy some people actually posted here. ^_^ keep on the comments w/suggestions.

Also maybe i should critize my own work. Welp, i can tell i screwed up on Asahi's fingers in the 2nd picture. It's how i inked in her fingers...i sorta put too much ink in it and made a few errors on it. welp, at least i can see that.

**LittleAngel** · 08-02-2005 09:03 PM

Both of them are good. Tsuna Kadiri is right: you do draw hands very well. At last I can see how you draw and ink pictures.

Alright, since you and I think the first one is well done, I'll move to the second picture.

I think you should draw the face of the guy one the left again, it looks unbalanced and the smile is too strange. Their poses and figures look great, but I don't like the scene you are depicting.

I don't know what you should put in the dialogue bubble. Uh..."Take your hand off of me!!!"?

**Kristen** · 08-03-2005 01:43 AM

Wow. ^____^ That's tremendously good! I like the poses and such and the style of it. =) Very gorgeous.

**Mayonnaise** · 08-03-2005 10:02 PM

I like the expiressions for the Yaoi pic. Only suggesstion I'm going to make is continue inking it. o.o;

And I really like the first pic. 10/10. ^_^

**yokoe1887** · 08-03-2005 10:27 PM

that's really good......Lol that guy in the second pic looks irritated by that person behind him Lol...and if you want a suggestion about the second pic.......you should have the person that is in the back looking at the guy in front of them with a devious look like they know they've did something bad (ya know..kinda squinted)...............by the way....don't change there mouth....it goes really well with the rest of the pic.......It would ruin the hilarity of the pic......sooooooooo........DON'T CHANGE THE MOUTH!..........okay =3..Lol.....

eyes like this...

**yuzuki_the_demonangel** · 08-03-2005 10:40 PM

WOW!!!!!! thats so awesome i lov ur pics their so kool

**banana_girl05** · 08-03-2005 11:39 PM

Those pics are pretty good. (^_^) I like the style you draw.

**Reiko Tusami** · 08-03-2005 11:45 PM

OOO!!! Me lyky!!! U draw good!

**Marillius Titus Leon** · 08-03-2005 11:53 PM

Nifty style; looks pretty hot. My only complaint is that the fingers of the guy standing behind the other guy seem a bit awkwardly drawn.

**Marie2007** · 08-04-2005 08:46 AM

wow awesome pics

**hkk** · 08-04-2005 05:58 PM

yea ,theyre really good.

to that left one:
nice theme and good composition. do you think of colorizing it?

but concerning the right one:
can you clean it up a little? the lines are in that two parts (red markings) not very nice, and it kinda spoils the whole drawing ^^ on the other hand other lines are very clear (blue markings) altogether this gives a strange contrast, which catches the eye and does not look good
but thats my opinion ^^ and thats what i would do

laterz, hkk

**Uchiha Ulquiorra** · 08-04-2005 06:03 PM

Cool drawings. You are talented

**Taikyo** · 08-04-2005 08:34 PM

thank you for the comments, i'll try my best to fix it up. ^_^ Anyways, im almost done with another picture, i'll post it down and see what you guys think of it. And yes, its a fan art. Anyways, thank you soo much for your comments. =3

**Naroku Inc.** · 08-04-2005 08:37 PM

nice. even though im not a fan of yaoi it came out good.

**mutsumi_yuri291** · 08-04-2005 08:48 PM

Those are very good! I can't draw at all, well actually I can make a pretty mean stick person lol!

**Ωmega** · 08-04-2005 09:20 PM

not bad,but you could use some improvement....and is he touching the others croutch

**chu** · 08-04-2005 09:58 PM

Hi... erm.. yeah.. new member here..

anyway...

i'm not gonna say ur pictures are horrible, ugly or whatnot.. because they're not!! in fact.. they're great..
but sadly, nothing's perfect

anywayz..

if u look at the first picture.. yes it is nice but.. i dunno what.. but her head seems.. odd somehow >.<"

and the shonen ai pic.. hilarious XD
but still.. the annoyed black haired dude...
he looks REALLY thin.. and his hips look too small for his body...
can't comment on the guy behind him though.. he's just cute^^

anywayz..

i really do admire ur un-laziness

because.. if I were to draw.. i would never.. EVER ink it... EVERR!!!!
too lazy.. can't help it

anywhos.. hope this could help u^^

cheers!
- FF