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Last edited by Daenerys; 11-29-2009 at 09:17 PM.
Excellent; I personally am fasinated by tales and stories of Jack the Ripper, so reading a short story on the subject was enjoyable. Keep up the excellant work; the last paragraph was my favorite, however.
I think the ending was rushed myself.. but thank you!
I might re-write it when I have more time. I'm actually on my mom's computer, so my creativity was stifiled. There's so much more I wanted to portray.
i was a great story plot and Jack the Ripper was a good charcter with a good classic sounding name
Oh.. but was that Jack the Ripper, or just some guy?
good story
Hrmm... I thought that the guy was Jack the Ripper, in the end. Maybe he wasn't; the ending was sorta a cliffhanger, but it's good.
it is a very good short story the plot is good as well
Sometimes The Minute You Give Up On Everything Somebody Shows Up And Cheers You Up Right Before Your Very Eyes It Happened To Me And He Knows Who He Is I Hope.
I forgot I wrote this. Aint half bad either. --hoping for more comments--
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