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    Default what do you think of my poem?

    14 crism moons earth the grass laid sounder upon
    red shadows spill from the eyes of the heart that which pools in tarnish grains of time
    starving pores request the strands of air
    these eyes catch not the yellows nor the oranges of being but paint the silver in the bullet

    where the green plates collide the elemental soul of rain rises breath no more to hear the speckled darkness imprisen the 14 free floating's incandesitity

    so what do you think? please reply
    catch the silver bullet and paint it into the sky
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    your an obserdist like me =) i liked it

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    so that is good, right?
    Last edited by Sweet Lucidity; 06-28-2005 at 10:31 PM.
    catch the silver bullet and paint it into the sky
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    lol, i like poems that make me think =D *cheers Sweet Lucidity on ^_~*

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nerveya
    lol, i like poems that make me think =D *cheers Sweet Lucidity on ^_~*
    thks for replying Nerveya!
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    Haha, i did because you deserved it ^_~

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    it has been up for a couple days now and hardly any one replyed so i thought they hated it it made me sad
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    ;; How mean, sorry i didn't reply sooner then lol. I don't know why anyone would hate it though, it's really good =D Wish i was a good poet, for now i can only admire ^^

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nerveya
    ;; How mean, sorry i didn't reply sooner then lol. I don't know why anyone would hate it though, it's really good =D Wish i was a good poet, for now i can only admire ^^
    all my poems come to me in my sleep maybe you will wake up one day and have lots of good poems

    ^_^

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    Oooh, i hope so ^^ I hope they're as good as yours ^_~ All i get from dreams are wierd visions of the future lol

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    i wish i had weird visions of the future

    ^_^

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    Lol, you wouldn't know how many people say that ^_~

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nerveya
    Lol, you wouldn't know how many people say that ^_~
    Amaze me.
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    Lol, considering you asked... i told a friend in high school, he told the whole 10th and 11th grade class x.x Everyone who saw me came up to me lol. That and i posted on moghouse forums about it~ it got to over a thousand posts lol. It got locked because of server backflow though~

    *cough* but isn't this a little off-topic lol~

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    The poem sounds pretty good and sophisticated, but you use quite alot of big words *@_@* I don't get what it's about.

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