Original Fiction: The Girl Who Lied For Love

[niKopol]

Ai that story has really peaked my interest...dark and twisted just the way mom used to make em.

ideas? ideas? hmm? aha just base one about me....trust me it'll go far.

[Ami~chan]

I liked it; it reminds me of a story that Tim Burton could make into a great film. While it lacks descriptive words, it reminds me of the stories me mum used to tell me. Keep up the greatness.

[Daenerys]

A very good story, Ai! How about, "There once was a girl that was really daft and dumb; she didn't like being ignored so she listened to your story and had the idea to get hit by a car, thinking she could be normal after the car hit her. The car hit her and she became un-daft n' dumb but she died at the same time."


Morals: Never listen to stories made by Ai when the person gets hit by a car, lives, and then dies in a hospital; Never read that story when you are daft n' dumb or else you'll get stupid ideas like the girl my version of this short story.

"AND THEY LIVED HAPPILY-COUGH COUGH- EVER AFTER, THE END!"

I like this idea alot.

Along with the safe sex idea.

[Bucky Katt]

Thank you, Ai! I'm glad you like the idea. Make another story like your first one! Lol.

[BrittyBott]

I liked it. Cheers, for making my day.

[Uchiha Ulquiorra]

good story i guess

[Daenerys]

Thanks to everyone who left comments and thoughtful advice.

[kakashiskitty]

i liked it alot good yet depressing awesome combo if ya ask me!