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-Winged dreams- from another aka's fan art ^_^
Ok don't kill me...I know that my fan artworks are not so wonderful, but I make this one for my future weblayout (with Iframe).
You'd seen my new avatar...this is the wall(originally 1024, the 1600 one will be put asap on my website).I've got the inspiration from Sting's "all this time" cd-book...
Ok critique, opinions and suggestion wanted
(both on the wall/fanart)
**Illuminated Spirits member**rem tene, verba sequentur (Cato)
never *ever* under estimate your art, ok? your fanart is *incredible* so dont let anyone tell you otherwise. you'll let me use one of your images sometime, right?
Love the feel of the wallpaper. The grunge is great without being tacky. Kind of iffy about the placement of the text, but the text you chose is good.
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:3 thanks!sure U can use my art! u can find it in the art section of my website,or on minitokyo...
About the text-placement:I was thinking about making it a bit larger...should I have to move it?
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if you make it larger, then no.
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"Spilt coffee has a sad remembrance of old"- from a plastic bag seen on the train
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I agree with Pooky about the text. Other than that, it's perfect and it really does look like a cd cover =) . About the fanart, the face looks good but you still have to work on those limbs. But hey, it's still a thousand times better than the best I can do.
:under construction:
your fanart does not suck. It rules. ^^ I say that because I can't cg well in photoshop yet. The limb of her right arm (our left) is a bit off but I've seen worst hehe hence my own full figure art. ANyways to the wallpaper..the colours are nice..just the text is a bit small also un-magical looking..I guess I am use to glowing text. ^^
Wow, thats fantastic, i wish i was good enough to do my own work like that. I think its perfect as is.
Oo
!!!!
how can you say that that is bad?! >.<
the limbs do need a bit of work. i like what text you used. ^^ but i do agree with MPC.
erm.....can't think of anything else that might be out of place.....
EXCELLENT WORK!!!!!!!!
Your fanart is pretty good ^^ My only complaint is the grunge... I hate grunge.. but that's totally a personal thing, so if you like it and others do (they seem to), leave it.
Suzuna - the inactive wonder!
Tied for first place in: Fall and Halloween Contest '04
You know you're going to marry me, right akachan? I mean, with my good looks and your wonderful artistic style, our children would lead the world in... EVERYTHING...
It truly is a case of beauty and the beast, but... if anyone else calls you a beast, I'll rip their lungs out.
All jokes aside, I really do enjoy clicking on one of your fanart pages when you submit one. It's like eggs in the morning... AFTER they've been cooked.
As usual, great job on a wonderful artistic thinger. Oh, look a butterfly... *chases*
I want to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather... not screaming and yelling like the passengers in his car.
Now this, this I fly with pride.
I really like your wp, but maybe you should tone down the text a bit, or not
'I wish she'd guri-guri me like that'
'Yes! Guri-guri-ing all over the place. I'm jealous!'
For Xian: only one word:
clear?
For Suzuna: I like a bit of grunge, it's almost a state of mind..sometimes I like to use it, even if I'm a happy girl, generally
anyway thanks to everyone
Edit: changed a bit the text, added to it a soft glow...if I have to make a dark ext with a light glow tell me...
Changed the fanart, arms elbows and legs...Better
changed a bit the pavement and the total gradient(but a very bit)
Hope is better ^^
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You are so mean to me. What did I ever do to deserve such scorn???Originally Posted by akachan
For Xian: only one word:
clear?
For Suzuna: I like a bit of grunge, it's almost a state of mind..sometimes I like to use it, even if I'm a happy girl, generally
anyway thanks to everyone
Edit: changed a bit the text, added to it a soft glow...if I have to make a dark ext with a light glow tell me...
Changed the fanart, arms elbows and legs...Better
changed a bit the pavement and the total gradient(but a very bit)
Hope is better ^^
*thinks she bought that*
I want to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather... not screaming and yelling like the passengers in his car.
Now this, this I fly with pride.
the text looks much better
Pink is the new Pooky
Party it up in Wallpapers | join the AF Gaia guild!
"Spilt coffee has a sad remembrance of old"- from a plastic bag seen on the train
musing of a mod : Illuminated Spirits : Theme: uber_pink
One thing I forgot to mention in my other post is that the knee looks funny. May wanna fix that. It's a little too angled. Also, the edges seem a bit sharp. Other than that, it looks fine.
I want to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather... not screaming and yelling like the passengers in his car.
Now this, this I fly with pride.
Nice, the 2nd one looks great ^_^
*Wizzy is waiting for the bigger version*
this is just........amazing ^.^ (just the right hands proportions are a bit off i think)
One thing I forgot to mention in my other post is that the knee looks funny. May wanna fix that. It's a little too angled. Also, the edges seem a bit sharp. Other than that, it looks fine.
Too big or small?just the right hands proportions are a bit off i think
thanks guys for the opinions!!!
Last edited by akachan; 10-21-2004 at 02:09 PM.
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it does look better.
i agree with the knee her left hand (out right) looks a bit small. maybe you could fix that?
a bit too big, but thats just me
ok 3.o version: edit :changed the hand as muzonaz said;changed the knee and fixed some edges as xian said and other parts...something else or is good as it is? if the fanart it's ok, I'll put on minitokyo(another egg for xian, even if I prefer milk and biscuits in the morning.. ^_^) If the wp is good I'll put the 1024 0ne on minitokyo and the 1600 version on AKWB(akachan's website.tk ^^) for the joy of all the larger screen's users
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Then biscuits and milk it shall be my princess.
*cough*
At any rate, you've nailed it this go round. It looks pretty.
I want to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather... not screaming and yelling like the passengers in his car.
Now this, this I fly with pride.
it is pretty good
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