A few corrections. In the first verse:
Doko e yuku michi na no ka
"yuku" is actually "tsuzuku".

Donna toki mo taiyou wo mitsukeru
is the last line (similar to the end of the second verse), not third-to-last. Also, "mitsukeru" should be (I think) "mitsumeteru".

And in the second verse:
Utsukushii keshiki ni naru
"naru" should be (I think) "aeru".