MADLAX ending song lyrics

[Midlight]

Hello, all:
Just wanted to point out some things I noticed in the lyrics:


//yoake no nemutasa ni tadayou michikado de//



I believe that should be "machikado" [street corner]
(I think both can work written, but I'm definitely hearing the "ma" rather than "mi" when sung)



//sabishisa no wadachi tadotte hitori kiri de yukeru kana//
There should be a particle after "wadachi". I believe it is wo/o "を”


//mioroshita hirosa yori sukoshi tooku e tsudzuiteiru//
I am hearing "yoru" [night], not "yori", which may change the translated sentence a bit. (Someone may need to confirm this one.)


//nagusame no senaka miokutte//
I'm not sure of the conjugation here. I believe it is "nagusama", rather than "nagusame"
(again, someone may have to make sure of that one)


Also, there is some singing during the bridge. It is a little difficult to make it out for me, but if that was needed/wanted to be figured out, I could probably try.


I hope this helps!

[bambooXZX]

For the third and fourth areas you pointed out, 'yori' and 'nagusame' are currently correct. (First two changes are good, though.)

Additional issue, stanza 8 line 4: 'hijimaru' -> 'hajimaru'

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Text (line divisions slightly different): https://www.uta-net.com/song/19564/

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