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    Default Toki ni wa Mukashi no Hanashi o corrections

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    1:2 Kayoi narete → Kayoinareta
    1:3 naraki → namiki
    1:8 kanjite → kanjita
    2:5 geshokuya → geshukuya
    3:4 iku nin ga → ikuninka


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    1:4 Koohii o ippai de ichinichi
    The translator has "Days full of coffee" but I think ippai should be taken literally, "one cup". I think the sense is:
    each day with it's cup of coffee
    1:5 Daremo ga kibou o takushita
    The translator has "None of us trusted others with our hopes". There is no negative, so daremo means "everyone". I think it means they entrusted "tomorrow" with their hopes. How about:
    where everyone entrusted their hopes

    2:2 Doko ni mo yukenai Minna de
    it's in potential form, they were "unable to go anywhere". How about:
    all of us, with nowhere to go.


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    Default Re: Toki ni wa Mukashi no Hanashi o corrections

    Apart from the usage of "it's", I agree. Old style submission and the original translator's site is down so I have just made the changes now.

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