Kakuzetsu thanatos - transliteration corrections

[forusu]

http://www.animelyrics.com/doujin/vo...suthanatos.htm - transliteration in question

onaji toka sou dai chigai -> onaji toka sou oochigai (The way it is pronounced and sung)

sore nara nani no DOREI ni naru ka - sore nara nanno DOREI ni naru ka (Same as above)

haikyo to bakashita - > haikyo to kashita (化した)

jounin mitai na FURI shite -> joojin mitai na FURI shite (常人)

sutare chiri to bakashita -> sutare chiri to kashita (化した again)

An addition I would like to propose is to add transliterations of the silent parts before choruses as they have never been transliterated online.

1st (Comes before "fu no kanjou kumi tateta ronri"):

[ayamachi wa itsukara?
umareta toki kara?
kotae wa hitotsu ni kimatte irudeshou
fukaina jiron
fukaina zatsuon
sou, zenbu, zenbu
JAMA
watashi wa machigattenai...]

2nd (Comes before "dareka ATASHI wo yonde alone"):

[atashi ga okizarina no ka
atashi ga okizarina no ka
kotae wa hitotsu ni kimatte irudeshou
daijina mono wa
kakuzetsu sareta mono wa
sou, zenbu, zenbu
JIBUN
kieta kunai...]

[Fuukanou]

Hi, these changes have now been made. I am also happy to add the additional transliterations if you can provide the transcribed kanji equivalent.

[forusu]

Many thanks!
Here is the kanji equivalent of the transliterations as it is in the official mv:

過ちわいつから
生まれた時から
答えは一つに決まっているでしょう
不快な持論
不快な雑音
そう
全部、全部
邪魔
[私は間違ってない]

あたしが置き去りなのか
アタシが置き去りなのか
答えは一つに決まっているでしょう
大事なモノは
隔絶されたモノは
そう
全部、全部
自分
[消えたくない]

[Fuukanou]

Thank you, all of these have now been added.

[forusu]

Thank you!

[forusu]

Additional minor corrections:

Romaji:
baka na tawagoto kikitaku nai - baka na tawagoto kikitaku wa nai (missing は particle)
kuroi hako de utte ita -> kuroi hako de utatte ita (歌っていた）
jounin mitai na FURI shite -> joujin mitai na FURI shite (常人）



Kanji:
馬鹿な戯言聞きたくはない -> 馬鹿（かた）な戯言（たわごと） 聞きたくはない (Baka is sung as Kata for some reason despite not changing the meaning; Zaregoto is sung as tawagoto in the song, please correct me if zaregoto is not the usual pronunciation)