Sakura (Cherry Blossom) Nirgilis corrections

[kibidango]

Hello,

Randomly decided to look at the lyrics for this song today. I see that the translations are kinda off.

https://www.animelyrics.com/anime/eureka7/sakura.htm

To me this reads more like:
Line 1-3
In the drowsy haze of the morning,
harsh light and,
an ending love.
Line 4
From tomorrow, separate roads
Line 5-6
Such a sudden preparation of the heart
Is impossible

Line 7-8 [No subject, therefore up to interpretation]
(It's) too profound/intense/deep,
I can't feel (my) heart directly

Line 9 -> Cherry blossom
Line 10 -> Cherry blossom
Line 11 ->
[up to interpretation, I think this is the cherry blossom landing on...]
on your shoulder while your hands are trembling

Line 14 -> All on you own
Line 15 ->[This] message ties a long sigh together

Line 19 (Karappo na kono hiroi sekai ni)
-> In in wide and empty world
Line 20 -> (Its as if) you eyes are speaking to me
Line 21 -> as they look at me and smile softly
(many of the lines are two parts of a single sentence)
Line 22-23 ->
How can you keep
standing so well?

Line 24 - [Something] that wont shrink
Line 25 - Did we know something like that?

Line 28 - To your voice, which falls like a petal
Line 29 - Sayonara, Fall in love

Line 30 - (A way of) Love
Line 31 - In this sky
Line 32 - [This] message ties a long sigh together
Line 33 - Sayonara, Fall in love

Line 35 - This continuous sadness
Line 36 - When does it end?

I think the rest is ok.

[Fuukanou]

While personally I have some interpretations that differ from yours, it is clear that yours is a much more accurate representation of the meaning.
I am happy to replace this whole translation with yours and put the credit for it into your name if you can provide the plain text for it (i.e. your single, final translation for the whole song without any "Line: XX" or pointing out the corrections). You can post it here or upload it onto pastebin and link it here if you want. If you want to fix the romanisation, I can transfer the credit for that onto you as well (otherwise I can do that if you don't want to)