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    Default moon corrections

    moon by sakka & iroha(sasaki)


    I and another translator at Vocaloid Lyrics Wiki checked the translation and we found the following issues:
    • sukitootta tsukiakari: "translucent moonlight" → "transparent moonlight"
    • toki wo koete: "time passes" → "crossing time"
    • kimi wo terasu mayowanu you ni: "You shine without hesitation" → "It shines on you so you don't lose your way"



    Also a typo line 3 romaji: boku no samishii → boku mo samishii.

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    Default Re: moon corrections

    The changes have now been made. I decided that as the user hasn't been online since 2007 it was probably pointless to alert them. For a future note, I'd appreciate if you could put the whole line to be replaced in (as you did in this thread https://www.animeforum.com/showthrea...er-translation in post 2. The colours aren't needed if you don't want to put them in) to make it easier to find exactly which line I'm making corrections to.

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