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    Default Chiisana Koi No Uta corrections

    Chiisana Koi No Uta by Mongol800. Some corrections and suggested improvements.



    v2 l4 hageshiku I think "violently" is too strong. how about "intensely"?


    v4 l1 "Even of" → "Even if" (I think it's just a typo)


    v4 l5
    eien no uchieien no fuchi I would change "Eternally recurring" → "Deep into eternity"


    v4 l7
    sore demosoredemo (minor point but it's listed as a conjunction in the dictionary)


    soredemo tarizu "But those words will never cease" I think it means "Even so, it's not enough"
    The "same words" he'll surely say won't suffice to express his feelings which will express themselves instead as tears and joy.





    I can't see a link to the Japanese lyrics or a link to add them. Here's a copy I found and adjusted to match the layout we have here:


    広い宇宙の数ある一つ
    青い地球の広い世界で
    小さな恋の思いは届く
    小さな島のあなたのもとへ

    あなたと出会い 時は流れる
    思いを込めた手紙もふえる
    いつしか二人互いに響く
    時に激しく 時に切なく
    響くは遠く 遙か彼方へ
    やさしい歌は世界を変える

    ほら あなたにとって 大事な人ほど すぐそばにいるの
    ただ あなたにだけ届いて欲しい 響け恋の歌
    ほら ほら ほら
    響け恋の歌

    あなたは気づく 二人は歩く
    暗い道でも 日々照らす月
    握りしめた手 離すことなく
    思いは強く 永遠誓う
    永遠の淵 きっと僕は言う
    思い変わらず同じ言葉を
    それでも足りず涙にかわり
    喜びになり 言葉にできず
    ただ抱きしめる ただ抱きしめる

    ほら あなたにとって 大事な人ほど すぐそばにいるの
    ただ あなたにだけ届いて欲しい 響け恋の歌
    ほら ほら ほら
    響け恋の歌

    夢ならば覚めないで
    夢ならば覚めないで
    あなたと過ごした時 永遠の星となる

    ほら あなたにとって
    大事な人ほど すぐそばにいるの
    ただ あなたにだけ届いて欲しい
    響け恋の歌

    ほら あなたにとって 大事な人ほど すぐそばにいるの
    ただ あなたにだけ届いて欲しい 響け恋の歌
    ほら ほら ほら
    響け恋の歌
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    Default Re: Chiisana Koi No Uta corrections

    I will send them a PM to them now. If @Wisamu doesn't respond in 2-3 weeks, I'll make a decision.

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    Default Re: Chiisana Koi No Uta corrections

    Sure.


    What about the Japanese lyrics? Is there a reason why I can't see or submit them?

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    Default Re: Chiisana Koi No Uta corrections

    I don't think there is a way for you to submit kanji through the main website, though there's a subforum here for posting kanji. I've put it in now either way.

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